A beautiful bud
Alone she was
No friend buds she had
her proud might be the cause!
But one day came a firefly
They became friends by the wish of god
Friendship started with a simple 'Hi'
This time she wasn't fraud!
No more proud
No more harsh she was
Their friendship was turning to love
when their came a pause!
One day due to a small fight
He cursed her and went away
She send other flies to find him right
But he was out of everybody's sight!
For days and weeks she kept on trying
Tears kept rolling , she started to lack
realised his mistake he decided to came back
entered her field, with realization he cried
Broke down when saw that while waiting for him SHE DIED!!
awesome :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali...:)
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This is sweetly written, but I was saddened after reading the climax :-(
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Deletedats the life of a flower bud, it's life is of a very short time..:)
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loved it...yarr....so beautiful..!!!
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DeleteFriendship and love do have a way of changing us. Aww...the ending was sad!
ReplyDeleteThats true poet..:)
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sad poem/story i dont know... but
ReplyDeletem glad to see you scribbling creative lines :P
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Thank u deeps...;)
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Hi you have a Very Nice Blog. . .
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lovely poem..u r right, too much ego kills a relationship and we are left only with deep regrets and pain in the end
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